Nameless attempt


This is my attempt to translate my recent posted article/poetic verses. It was written in my mother tongue during the boredom of post graduation classes. Its just a supporting post for my recent post 🙂 :p

He welcomed me to the court of love

I ignored the restriction of age

Initial steps were instantaneous

Within days my steps became painful

Without my conscience, my soul

Roamed on the valleys of love.

Joy gushed in almost everything

Slowly I realized

The new beats in me

The initial beats of love, with

My acceptable mind I wandered

I gave ears to my heart

With no one’s knowledge

 Accepted the sweet whisperings of love,

The ailment of love

I was mistaken, I never thought

The ailment to aggravate

Before me “How and why” were my questions

They stood without answer

I thought love was sweet

There also I was mistaken

Love is only sweet laded condition

I don’t hold such a thought anymore

At last I realized that LOVE is sharper than death

Pic Courtesy: One of my favorite artist who has magic in his brush Mopasang Valath. Acrylic painting “Girl enjoying rain” done by Mopasang Valath


About elaine ecosmith

Dreaming to be a marine conservation biologist. Hold passion for books and to write on random sparks which could result in essay, poetry or fiction. Love movies and music. I believe in finding peace with oneself and always have gratitude for all what you have got 😊☺️

26 responses to “Nameless attempt

  1. Wow! So poetic 🙂
    Love is Awesome!

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  2. So beautifully written Elaine loved your love👌👌👌👌👌

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Wow peom!. You run an amazimg blog. Looking forward to more posts!


  4. tejasvimys

    Whoa! Good one, well penned!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Poetry and the picture both are spectacular… Well-done

    Liked by 1 person

  6. I just love feeling the feeling called Love …..chilling drops of 💓💓💓

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  7. Hi elaine! I have nominated you for “the versatile blogger award ” for your amazing writings check this link for more details.

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